MY BIOGRAPHY
My name is Maria de los Angeles Grisales Gómez, I am 15 years old, i was born Bogotá Colombia. I live in Bogotá 15 years ago, i live with my mother,father,brother and dog, i have a dog her name Princesa.My parents name Leonardo Grisales Beltran and Dora de los Angeles Gomez Zuluaga they are merchants.I like dance,eat,sleep,practice sports,listen to music,read,draw.When i be older i want Dj,professional dancer, merchants and coach.
My name is Maria de los Angeles Grisales Gómez, I am 15 years old, i was born Bogotá Colombia. I live in Bogotá 15 years ago, i live with my mother,father,brother and dog, i have a dog her name Princesa.My parents name Leonardo Grisales Beltran and Dora de los Angeles Gomez Zuluaga they are merchants.I like dance,eat,sleep,practice sports,listen to music,read,draw.When i be older i want Dj,professional dancer, merchants and coach.
Great I
want to be that because I from childhood dreamed of see me on a stage doing what I like and that is to dance, I want
to show others what I am passionate about being and showing
everything in this life is possible only if your propose it.
Good job my dear
ResponderBorrarGood writing but be careful with the gerunds and infinitives.
ResponderBorrarYour grade is 80